what d u think of my short poem "no news,no pain in the feast" ?

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I wish i could drop u

only one line

I wish u would ask me

if I was fine



for a very short time

i thought u r mine

for a very long time

i felt the bitterness

in my smile



I am sad

but it doesn't show

it doesn't hurt

but it does grow;

the quietness of sadness

the dryness of tears

the daily routine

the happy sad me

it doesn't hurt

but it does grow



i hope it would reach u

the only line i wrote;

"Happy feast"
 
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