El Greco (R)
New member
bronze fog bell
Acclaimed invite - the bronze fog bell,
in mid damp air, black was the ship,
revengeful diktat and dark spell,
the ghost ship floats to send its knell
(dimensions odd - vectors of wield) ,
attract to ship where doors are sealed,
false worlds invite with dusk's befall,
doomed spell avers my crimson spilled.
The nimbus deign and winds beseech,
sea men confreres, as night will bend,
the ghosts from depths attempt to reach,
the trips to ports that minds bewitch,
denounced their scopes and thoughts ardent,
with spells they flirt - while discordent,
raindrops of red from clouds besiege,
ship's descant course - and accordment.
(C) G.V. 11-30-2012, All Rights Reserved
(Iambic tetrameter)
Acclaimed invite - the bronze fog bell,
in mid damp air, black was the ship,
revengeful diktat and dark spell,
the ghost ship floats to send its knell
(dimensions odd - vectors of wield) ,
attract to ship where doors are sealed,
false worlds invite with dusk's befall,
doomed spell avers my crimson spilled.
The nimbus deign and winds beseech,
sea men confreres, as night will bend,
the ghosts from depths attempt to reach,
the trips to ports that minds bewitch,
denounced their scopes and thoughts ardent,
with spells they flirt - while discordent,
raindrops of red from clouds besiege,
ship's descant course - and accordment.
(C) G.V. 11-30-2012, All Rights Reserved
(Iambic tetrameter)