What are your recommendations for improvements on this drawing?

Rodger Wang

New member
Hi, I started drawing (or at least trying) manga last week, so yeah, I'm still a newbie at it. I was hoping if anyone would look at this drawing of mine and give me some recommendations on how to get better, such as stating my mistakes and such.

Here is my picture:
http://i1182.photobucket.com/albums/x445/RodgerFTW/drawingmangagirlresized.jpg
I had to brighten it a little because my camera was horrible so it turned out really dark.
alright I took a better photo of it, here it is
http://i1182.photobucket.com/albums/x445/RodgerFTW/212748.jpg
 
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