What are your comments abour this short business-like letter?

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migraine

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Please take time to make it perfect sense and concise as well.
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Dear Mr. Gomez,
I've completed and minimized the size of file concerning the Permit cards for operating our lifting equipment.

Please take time to double-check the format of those cards. Afterwards, I'll print them out.

Thanks for your prompt attention.
Regards,
Full name
 
In my opinion "Double-check" is rather colloquial, try "review" in its place. Also, because you are asking for something to be done, personalize your final thank-you with something like " I appreciate your prompt attention", which sounds more meaningful than the common thank-you.

Otherwise, your grammar and spelling are correct.

Good luck!
 
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