"you better also try to improve your IQ" my crime,i just gave my honest suggestion to his poem.here is the poem
It is of no wonder
Keeping distance
In words and straggle
Don’t pity on red color
It is not her blood
Bleeding from heart
Its poison in red color
my queries were what is the meaning of word straggle ,what is this poem trying to say,honestly read it and tell me does this make any sense,doesn't it look like as if two unrelated ideas are merged into one and he has tried to present it as poem.
his english is pathetic,but one can understand that since it is not his first language,but the ideas and thoughts that he presents in his poem are senseless ,here is another line for the self confessed genius poem ,"I would have filled her emotions
With my stormy and naughty blood" can any one out here grasp the concept of stormy and naughty blood,what is this line supposed to mean ?
not only these lines,but all his works ,forget about grammatical mistakes,but even where he gets the grammar correct the lines simply don't make any sense !
who needs to improve on his IQ me or him?
It is of no wonder
Keeping distance
In words and straggle
Don’t pity on red color
It is not her blood
Bleeding from heart
Its poison in red color
my queries were what is the meaning of word straggle ,what is this poem trying to say,honestly read it and tell me does this make any sense,doesn't it look like as if two unrelated ideas are merged into one and he has tried to present it as poem.
his english is pathetic,but one can understand that since it is not his first language,but the ideas and thoughts that he presents in his poem are senseless ,here is another line for the self confessed genius poem ,"I would have filled her emotions
With my stormy and naughty blood" can any one out here grasp the concept of stormy and naughty blood,what is this line supposed to mean ?
not only these lines,but all his works ,forget about grammatical mistakes,but even where he gets the grammar correct the lines simply don't make any sense !
who needs to improve on his IQ me or him?