well am having trouble writing the kissing part in a story?

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am in drama class and they ask us to write a first kiss scene but right now i can think of anything help please
 
use loads of emotions
here are some ideas:
my heart skipped a beat
my heart was pounding in my chest
my hands were wet and clamy
i felt faint
my stomach started to turn
i hyperventilated
my breathing slowed (or quickenned)
i started shaking
so many thoughts were zooming around in my head then he leaned in and my heart skipped a beat. would i do this right? what would he think of me if i made a mistake?
(etc) his lips were soft and his breath inviting it was lovely (or you could go in the oppisite way saying it was un comfortable and fell short of expectations) add more datials to it like how maybe you closed your eyes and couldnt believe you were realyl there or something and if you held hands etc.
hope this helps good luck!!:)
 
Ill thell u by girls side...k...

The rain was cool aginst my skin,and his grip was tight across my back.his chest was aginst mine with the lightest press. I could feel my heart flutter like a humming bird. The kiss was inevitable,an unescapeable pull he had on me. I leaned in slow enought to feel his sweet breath aginst my lips. As his lips touched with a gental tone. Feeling the velvet swipes of his lips caused my hands to tangle in his hair. Pulling him closer and closer,tighter and tighter with each passing second. Then i slowly pressed my lips one more time before i genalty un locked my lips. He smiled his loving smile as we both looked at the clouds. I was soaked, he was soaked but who cared. For the moment i. Was in a place wher nothin matter. Thats when i knew i wanted him forever.

Hope it helps...im only in seventh grade so tried to help as much as i could.!
 
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