wedding invitation wording...PLEASE HELP IM STUCK!?

Nenis

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So my husband and I never had a proper wedding, so we wanna invite our close friends and family on a 4 day wedding cruise with us. We have family members willing to fly to Miami (where the cruise sails from) but we dont know how to word it,we'd rather it be more humourus than formal. how do i sound:
Dennis Irene and Alexandra (our daughter)
invite you to their wedding!
september 12 2011
Find your way to Miami, and our cruise wedding is on us!

it sounds like a sales pitch, but we wanna use that last line!
 
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