ways to improve my writing?

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I enjoy writing stories and prose.
I recently found a site called fictionpress, and I love it.
The stories on there are really amazing and the community is flooded with inspirational writers!
I hope to improve my writing and maybe I can get some feedback on here for my latest (incomplete) story?
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2533901/1/Our_Bittersweet_Love_Story

thanks a lot! =)
 
work on your narrative -
you need to use actions to express the characters feelings instead of just stating them.
 
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