Villanelle help please?

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A R

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I have written this Villanelle please can someone tell me if it is in Iambic pentameter as I am not sure.
Many Thanks

evening approaches skies are grey
each day passes with heavy heart
time is passing so is the day

hours tick by nothing is okay
time marches on whilst we're apart
evening approaches skies are grey

in the morning time will replay
minutes hours days where does time start?
time is passing so is the day

all around me times on display
time always there never departs
evening approaches skies are grey

clocks ticking time moving I say
one month left countdown can start
time is passing so is the day

at night i close my eyes and pray
please be safe while we are apart
evening approaches skis are grey
time is passing so is the day
 
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