Going through life with nothing to worry bout
Is how i lived on but now I'm just full of doubt
I'm called a failure they say that he'll never sprout
He's to weak, he's a punk, he ain't nothing to worry bout
It ain't the greatest sound
When you're already down
With these words so profound
Pulling you underground
I try whatever i could
To stay on the path moving forward
But whenever i would
I'd be dragged even lower
With the problems i face, I got enough on my mind
But i pick up the pace, to keep myself in the line
To that fine, future career that you all want
Blinded by the subliminal fear, like a taunt, that will haunt
You to the day that you die
Like the Grim creeping up all around you
Controlling every single aspect of your life
It's unreal what you feel
But the truth is never too far behind
You need to rise
Confront and show that you got nothing to hide
Overcome all these things that you hate and despise
Every single person that played with your fu*ken mind
Will be left to hide, cornered to be forgotten
Watching you on a screen, how you build and arise
From the slums that you fought in to shining high in the skies
Well I'm new to writing to be honest. And this was created in about an hour, total time. I know it's probably not the best and that it could probably be arranged differently to make it sound better, but overall, what do you think? Thanks in advance.
Side note** I don't know how to write a chorus D'= any help will be appreciated. Oh, and i forgot to mention that it's along the lines of a rap/hip-hop song, and it's sang kind of fast.
It's not a me vs the world, it's my life, so it's more of a me vs the people i grew up with in school, and the people who judged me by what they see and hear about me. This is me against them, and showing that i can succeed rather than be branded a failure.
Is how i lived on but now I'm just full of doubt
I'm called a failure they say that he'll never sprout
He's to weak, he's a punk, he ain't nothing to worry bout
It ain't the greatest sound
When you're already down
With these words so profound
Pulling you underground
I try whatever i could
To stay on the path moving forward
But whenever i would
I'd be dragged even lower
With the problems i face, I got enough on my mind
But i pick up the pace, to keep myself in the line
To that fine, future career that you all want
Blinded by the subliminal fear, like a taunt, that will haunt
You to the day that you die
Like the Grim creeping up all around you
Controlling every single aspect of your life
It's unreal what you feel
But the truth is never too far behind
You need to rise
Confront and show that you got nothing to hide
Overcome all these things that you hate and despise
Every single person that played with your fu*ken mind
Will be left to hide, cornered to be forgotten
Watching you on a screen, how you build and arise
From the slums that you fought in to shining high in the skies
Well I'm new to writing to be honest. And this was created in about an hour, total time. I know it's probably not the best and that it could probably be arranged differently to make it sound better, but overall, what do you think? Thanks in advance.
Side note** I don't know how to write a chorus D'= any help will be appreciated. Oh, and i forgot to mention that it's along the lines of a rap/hip-hop song, and it's sang kind of fast.
It's not a me vs the world, it's my life, so it's more of a me vs the people i grew up with in school, and the people who judged me by what they see and hear about me. This is me against them, and showing that i can succeed rather than be branded a failure.