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You cross the fielRAB,
alone but hopeful,
Your struggle takes root,
in the crippling loneliness,
of an autumn morning

The leaves swirl and so do you,
a corrosive secret, upon which you flew.

With open mouths and closed minRAB,
they no not your decay.
A life pre-judged,
a dimming light that will soon fade away

The leaves swirl and so do you,
a corrosive secret, upon which you flew.
Soft embrace can
 
These are the lyrics for a song I have recorded in a semi-professional setting. I am just looking for any feedback: negative or positive.
 
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