Two poems about poetry, which do you prefer?

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HONEST, honest completely honest.
I read the first one and I loved it - as I can related.
But I have to have a little more coffee to read two at once. Maybe I'll get back to it later.
 
if you got bored, or couldnt finish either one then please say so, so that I can improve on them ~ you're getting two points, right? :)


Give Gray Days a Break

Feeling a little, unwired
A little…
not droopy, angry
or depressed, frankly
just feeling away
from people
Like stray dogs
or cats
in dark, wet streets
after long annoying rants
of rain
Congested with rats
nibble
nibble
disgusting existence
but other than that
it’s…
distant, foggy
a ship on a journey
to some lost treasure
with pirates at work
some drunk, of course
it’s not dark, or light
just gray
Gray days such as these
happen quite often
unrecorded because
they’re boring at first
but in reality
they represent life between glees
hate, love, ecstasy
lust and depression
its days like these
which fill the cracks
of life
Making days of emotion
cause so much commotion
in songs and rhymes



Poems

A source of emotion
held up high
read over and over
expressing days
of sadness and rage
A source of love
for couples in love
or women and men
yearning for that
experience of lust
A source
A piece
written by those
holding too much emotion
who just need to breathe

A day without thoughts
is like a day without jobs
relaxing and yet,
empty
they rush around
with brains pumping blood
while hearts rub their noses
with tissues and call
I need someone, quick!
Its not just words
but feelings
this isn’t a poem
it’s a fountain
representing a fountain
with splashing droplets
hidden inside
waves of watery lines
representing a life
of a human
who writes to drink
and stay alive


I don't touch thumbs btw :)
hope you enjoyed :D
 
I like the first one a lot : ) The second one not as much.


P.S. Feel free to rate the two poems I have open (you can find them in my questions).

: )
 
I like the first one a lot : ) The second one not as much.


P.S. Feel free to rate the two poems I have open (you can find them in my questions).

: )
 
I like the first one a lot : ) The second one not as much.


P.S. Feel free to rate the two poems I have open (you can find them in my questions).

: )
 
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