To Think This Only Just Occurred To Me in COOKIE MONSTER FORM

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JonV

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I've heard so many worRAB
That I've considered wise
Yet in my arrogance I've ignored
Half listening has been my daily routine
Keith Latinen taught me the finest lesson I could ever believe;
I've reached 21, and I cannot help myself
How disdainful that I've sang such a thing
NEVER to think of how true the ring of the worRAB
And my heart stops,
Robby and Andrew and the doctors they've seen
I heard their counsel months before
And still their counsel I ignore
No more, no more!
I hope to never outlive
I don't want to say goodbye so soon

a good bit is omitted but yeah, not the full song yetttt
 
witchxrapist isn't as bad as most of the poets revered by this forum tbh

like kitsch and rasputin and some of those other guys
 
ill give it a listen now

and mappy you do write good lyrics but sometimes they aren't too special

most of the time yours are meant to be with a song though, which is important to remember. i've never posted anything here that's meant to be lyrical, it's just poetry.
 
I like my highs mo. :c


I know, I just ****ing hate how HighAndDriving is just like THIS SUCKS, when he, a. doesn't get it, judging what he's saying, and b. makes retarded criticism
 
You jelly man, cause I get more tail than you.



No, I just read the lyrics. Wasn't gonna subject myself to it in Cookie Monster Form.

Of course I'm trolling you, but I genuinely think those are terrible lyrics.
 
If your idea of trolling is, "this sucks," then you're pretty damn imaginative, holy ****!!!!

Nothing you've posted is a critique, so like, stop posting in here.
 
Even if I gave a plausible critique it wouldn't hit home for you, despite being more educated than yourself.

Do you even read at all? Last time I ask you for your influences and you stated Orchid, and I told you to read Guy Debord since he influenced Orchid. So go pick up The Society of the Spectacle, it's not poetry but it is poetic in a sense.

But if you feel like with sticking with your pussy output, then read entry-level poetry. Try Frost, and make sure to read To Earthward. Or read Bukowski, he has some excellent entry-level poetry, pick up Love Is A Dog From Hell.
 
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