this poem was really difficult for me to write emotionally. i'd like to hear what...

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Sarah

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...you think of it? i wrote this today. i don't do a lot of writing but this was important to me. i would like to hear what you think it's about and what you think of it. thank you!


Thief
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so early in the morning
lost in the sheets and this
moonless midnight
no breath in her lungs
no peace behind her eyes
she lies awake
wait for the sunrise

there is no point in sleeping
things will never be the same
she lies broken, cold and weeping
can't live with this shame

oh, little girl
why do you seem so blue?
i look in your eyes,
i see right through
and there is only pain inside of you

i'm young
i'm young, she said
in a blurred memory
of potions and robbers
she cries,
a cold man he
took the light in my eyes
the warmth in my heart
the curve of my smile
i'm falling apart

please
i never gave you anything
let me take it back

there is no point in sleeping
things will never be the same
she lies broken, cold and weeping
can't live with this shame

i can't live with this shame
 
that was completely beautiful.. it took my breath away
this has such strong emotion and it is written beautifully too.

you should be proud of yourself.
 
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