This is the first song i've written ever?! [it's prolly really bad so dont judge meee!

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x]? soo i wrote this in like 5 minutes so it's prolly not that good could you give me some advice? thanks love.(:

You're withered away but your voice remains inside of my head
These thoughts are like an endless nightmare come true how the hell did this happen to you?
I can't stop thinking about this haunting dream,breathe in slowly noe, these haunting dreams could possibly kill me.

Where are you now?
Where have you gone?
this is like a game of hide and seek gone all fuc.king wrong

I still can't see you every corner i've looked around you're nowhere to be found, you're just not there,maybe you've dissapeared into thin air.
Give me a hint? Give me a clue? Just something that can lead me back to you

Where are you now?
Where have you gone?
This is like a game of hide and seek gone all fuc.king wrong

yeah i know it's short i can't think of what to add on to it...
 
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