This is my new poem it comes from my heart will you please comment?

Caz

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And can you suggest a tittle thank you

Beam fall's on beam
Awoke a knew dream
Dance in silver-white
In golden silk she stands
Her reflection in the mirror
Showed a perfect pose
As she danced and she danced
On her tip-toes
With such music sweet
No dictionary of a living tongue
Can ever be as perfectly delivered
As the dance of the silver-white Swan

Beam's fall on Beam's
As the apple-bloom fall's
She as born a dancer
And shall be
For ever -more
For the life
that she has
And the dance
that she gives,

Is yours
And yours
And yours .
 
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