this is a poem i wrote to my girlfriend is it good or bad?

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i love you i can say it a billion times and it will always mean the same thing,

i miss you i can see you a billion times and never be enough

i hate you i can say it a billion times and it will always be a lie
 
Personally, I wouldn't want to receive that poem, but if you're giving her it anyway .. fix the second line to "I miss you I can see you a billion times and IT WILL never be enough.
 
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