Hi this is my opening para of my book, does it grab you and make you want to read more? If not, what is wrong with it and what would make it better? thanks x
I heard the high pitched ring of the phone coming from down the hallway. It came, just as I had placed my hand on the door knob. I turned around and hurried to answer it. It was the one phone call I should have never answered, the one I shouldn't have run back for. I should have just ignored it and continued to walk out of my front door. But I didn't.
I heard the high pitched ring of the phone coming from down the hallway. It came, just as I had placed my hand on the door knob. I turned around and hurried to answer it. It was the one phone call I should have never answered, the one I shouldn't have run back for. I should have just ignored it and continued to walk out of my front door. But I didn't.