The Gentle Gardner

[Alissa P]

Poem I wrote.

The Gentle Gardener
The gentle gardener strolled through his orchard,
and the willows wept,
and the dogwooRAB and dandelions swooned,
and the roses didn't care,
and he knew he couldnt have them,
for the tough soil kept them there.

 

[Adios]

just realized i spelled "Gardener" wrong in the thread title. FML

 

[Patrick B]

i think you missed a 'he' after knew as well

i like this, it's short and sweet with poignant imagery

 

[Bored dude]

Wow,I spelled "orchard" "orchid."

I can not spell at all.

Thanks rasputin. Any guess as to its meaning?

 

[studentRN]

I dig this, reminRAB me of Aaron Weiss a bit.