Tell me what you think of these lyrics? Please (:?

Ryan

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Verse 1:
Had so much pain flowing through my life
Its hard to say what is wrong an what is right
Mother and Father are sometimes there
Brother and Sister have been absent an its more than a decade in
But Ive got keep strong no Ill never cave In
Gotta keep pushing to higher grounds
Till I'm at the top an yet I'm barely surfacing
Ive gotta keep going till My music is what hear
And my name is what they see
At the top of the mountain Right above the next guy
Who wants a spot on the list, no Ill never stop
Till the things Ive got is the things that i miss
I know if i die i pray the lord my soul to take
I just pray it ain't that way, but i keep praying my days away

Chorus
Just keep pushing till I'm at the top
With all my fallen friends who devoted there life
And i know i gotta a lot of problems but people got worse
Who am i to complain, Ive got a life that i want to live

Verse 2 :
Give me reasons to believe
In the impossible things bigger than me
To the answers i don't know an the questions of my life
To the path that i lead an the problems i must swallow
Be a man gotta stand my ground never back down
Till the battle is won, fighting till my last breath
Till the clock runs out, cause in life overtime in nullnvoid
Only one chance and you better do it right or lose it all tonight
Do you get it that if i die, i want to leave a legacy
Something for everyone to remember me by
Man i know its a risk, but with everyone by my side
I can make it, just give me the strength i need to proceed
And i can make it

Chorus
Just keep pushing till I'm at the top
With all my fallen friends who devoted there life
And i know i gotta a lot of problems but people got worse
Who am i to complain, Ive got a life that i want to live

Verse 3 :
Uh, 3rd Verse, No bridge, No hook
But, let me introduce a special someone in my life
You know they save the best for last, thats no lie
Let me introduce her as i part the seas and empty the skies
She's the one i can look to when the sun don't shine
Cause i know were always shining through the darkest nights
Breaking into the dawn i can see the light, Its You and I
Ive got her back shes got mine, Shes got my heart an Ive got hers
Were climbing so high to the point where our dreams float by
Lord knows I'm at the top cause only heavens right above it
So glad that I'm here and your to share it with me
Giving you all Ive got, the world will never overlook me
So till the end of time or the stars blow from the sky
I want you to know that I love and i always will
So till the end of time i hope it remains you and I


Upcoming mixtape is dropping soon, this is a set of lyrics that will be on the mixtape. What do you think?
 
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