Just tell me what you think and how i could make it better. its about how i used to be number one in my gf's heart and now she doesn't seem to want to make time for me in her life.
A Losing Champion
There’s always an opponent,
Always a winner to my last place finish.
First’s sterling exterior is always more appeasing,
Even second place seems to glisten in her eye.
My once appealing appearance now seems tarnished by time.
Am I not interesting anymore?
I was first once,
Nothing could pass my ranking.
I was brand new and exciting.
She dreamt of occasions when we could be together.
I was her fantasy.
The earth revolved around us,
There was always time for each other
Each moment was cherished as if it were our last together,
But now others have taken my place.
I have been falling off the map
As if I were a rock being thrown down a hill,
Hitting rock bottom with no way out.
Attempts have been futile,
Trying to escape the bottom,
Hiding my face with a mask,
Disguising myself to become first again,
Only to fall back down harder,
Smashing all hope of being her champion again.
