tell me what you think about this poem rhyme please!?

Dean

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its something i wrote for my gf a long time ago on valentines day do you think it sounds lame? i wrote it during a bad time in my life and i dont know if i have talent or not im 15 i write alot please tell me what you thin

there is this person an angel
a reason for hope
my reason to cope

she is everywhere
but far from where i am from my wish that will never come and cant be won
my love, a love so deep
a love to keep
a love tough as nails
a love that will never fail

she is the one and only
with out her i am done and lonely
she is what makes my day
she makes me want to say hey please dont go away
hold her and stay
she is a feeling i never felt before
she leaves me wanting more
she is what i adore.
 
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