Tell me what ya'll think about my new poem. Do you understand the messge?

R

R.I.P. Hip Hop 1978-2003

New member
I’m calling you

Running away
From poetic rhymes
Negative critics
Kills me every time
Put the pen down
Throwing away the pad
Poetic flows have become
Addiction that’s turned bad
A voice in my ear
I don’t want to hear
A soft voice
That sounds sweet and clear
Syncing in and out
What is this about?
I’m calling you
I need you
Pick up the ink
I bleed you
I need you
I’m calling you
 
its nice however IF you are looking for flow at some places it doesnt flow... BUT if your looking for deep meaning then surely this is art! yet the poem is clearly telling me not to criticize your work lol
 
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