Suicidal poetry

[K.I.N.G™]

I personaly don't like poetry but i couldn't help but put a piece of poetry i wrote that got me sent to the school psyciatrist for 2 weeks.
Final Dream
I do not know where I stand
So desolate and bliss
I've never seen this wasteland
Where I see nothing that exists

I cannot find my friends
Or anyone at all
I knew i'd lose them in the end
When I tripped into that steep fall

I think that I am sleeping
Or maybe i passed out
I hear my relatives weeping
And all my friends shout

Then it occurs in my head
I discover and I deem
While I lie in this dark bed
I'm in my final dream

 

[Mr.Orange]

Good job :thumbsup:

That's art, not suicide.

 

[vikhs]

yeah, that is art if u ask me. i said that before i read the other guys reply.

 

[killakatnow]

Wow, that's really good. Sounds like a foreword for a terrifying noval.

 

[blackopen]

Check out the writers block. We are always up for new writings from new members as long as it follows the rules. Thanks.

 

[hilaryyyx]

That sound cool not suicidal.
This poem=:thumbsup: