suggestions on my photography?

[country girl all the way!]

first off, will you please go to the attached site and rate my pic and then just tell me your comments, what you think about it, and what i could have done different. Thanks
http://www.photolaureates.org/rank_photo/index.php?pID=207500
http://www.icpawards.com/2007winners/images/Student_150005003_2.jpg
i also attached another one of my pictures, cause cobra said she could not judge the first one. im open to any kind of advice. I am 14 and i took the bear one as a 13 yr old, but i really want advice especially on the eagle because we are going back to see the eagles in canada this summer and i would really like to get some nice shots. Thanks
and yes it is a real pick. it was flying over the water after it took a bath in the small river

 

[cobra]

It is so abstract it is hard to judge as a photograph. No insult intended.

 

[*Chantal*]

The one of the bird is cool, I gave it a 9. I will say though it was hard at first to figure out what the background was and I think the first answerer in front of me thought it was photoshopped but I see what you did - following the bird with your lens over a fairly long exposure making everything else look blurry. Very intriguing pic!

 

[jadeypie100]

It looks like you've taken a picture, of a painting.