Start/prologue of my story. Suggestions?

Ella Mackenzie was a person who could light up anyone’s day just by smiling. When you saw her you thought of wonderful things. All the lovely things that make up the world and make it worth living in. Color and light and music and life and joy and love. She drew others to her like moths to a flame, and from a young age anyone could see she was special. She had a personality that was brilliant and sweet. But Ella was different. She was unusual, and wasn’t like other little girls. No one noticed though, all assuming it was just the person she was. Except for Nathan.

i'm not sure about the names yet but yeah :)
 
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