Spare a minute for a quick read and to give your opinion on my poem please?

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Poot

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I've never had to wonder
I've never had to fear
I've always been able to count on
You being there

No matter the mistake
No matter the time
I've always been able to count on
You to make it fine.Â*

I may never say it
I may not let it show
Your a true friend
I never want to see goÂ*
I've never had to wonder
I've never had to fear
I've always been able to count on
You being here

No matter the mistake
No matter the time
I've always been able to count on
You to make it fine.Â*

I may never say it
I may not let it show
You're a true friend
I never want to see goÂ*
 
Quite charming in its simplicity. I quite like it, but you've spelt "your" wrong, should be "you're a true friend"

Also, I'd have gone for "you being here" at the end of the first verse rather than "you being there", but only because it rhymes better and I like a good bit of rhyming.

Nice.
 
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