Soup du Jour {Yo! Is This a sonnet???}?

[Geminisinger]

Ah, distance! The most dreaded Soup de Jour,
Unseen planets push us farther away.
Your fingerprints melted from my front door-
Two gray haired ragamuffins gone astray.

Ah,Reason! It can't lasso all this pain.
Frustrated just wondering where you are--
Questioning whether to see you again,
Praying your way will be lit by a star.

 

[Nicole Stover]

not quite, you need to have 14 lines. you only have 8. the rhyming sequence is ABAB, CDCD, EFEF, GG.
hope this helps!

 

[Missy]

its close to being a sonnet (i guess)
But remember, sonnets are suppose to have 14 lines