The blossom of the flowers draws a near
And spring shakes off and melts the flowers ice
The earth revolves as spring in light is here,
And thy fair, blooms its beauty concise.
The colors radiate the love divine
Through pollen the fallen are reborn
They disperse around like a crazy green vine
Understand the flowers natural flow.
But there is still something that I don't know.
Incomprehensible to me, unknown;
There is an awe that no-one will out grow
Life bestowed upon us by a higher being,
I weep his knowledge in this state of being.
by daniel gonzalez
can you tell me how it sounds and if you caught any errors ?
please? thanks in advance
And spring shakes off and melts the flowers ice
The earth revolves as spring in light is here,
And thy fair, blooms its beauty concise.
The colors radiate the love divine
Through pollen the fallen are reborn
They disperse around like a crazy green vine
Understand the flowers natural flow.
But there is still something that I don't know.
Incomprehensible to me, unknown;
There is an awe that no-one will out grow
Life bestowed upon us by a higher being,
I weep his knowledge in this state of being.
by daniel gonzalez
can you tell me how it sounds and if you caught any errors ?
please? thanks in advance