Someone correct me this writing?, please?

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Anton R

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My friend went shopping at the supermarket "hipercor". When he was finished, they gave him a ticket to enter a draw for a car, and he gave them his information. He put all his purchases towards it in order to have a greater chance of winning.A few months ago they sent him a letter informing him that he had won, but he didn't believe it so he went to the supermarket to confirm. He was very happy because all he had to do was pass the driver's test
 
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My friend went shopping at the supermarket "Hipercor". When he HAD finished they gave him a ticket to enter a draw for a car, and he gave them his information. He put all his purchases towards it in order to have a greater chance of winning. A few months ago they sent him a letter informing him that he had won, but he didn't believe it so he went to the supermarket to confirm. He was very happy because all he had to do was pass HIS driverING test
 
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