Some Thoughts on This Milieu, C/C?

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Candyman

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This milieu is disappointing
Bringing out the best in none
Empowered by a false anointing
Often dark and rarely fun

At times when we submit our best
Your sudsy answers foam and lather
*I'm not sure, should I be impressed
With your advice that's mostly blather

Perhaps you should give more thought
To the answers that you offer
It's your approval that been sought
Stop being such a scoffer
The queen of the leaderboard
Within the realm of YAP
Intriguing yes, but not adored
The numbers are just crap

I agree that she does know her stuff
For her approval I won't beg
But maybe if I ask nice enough
She'll come and lift her leg
I struggle to understand how or why answers could be reported and deleted. I hold you all in high regard and appreciate your work. Thank you all for playing...
 
Oh, I have NO problem denying her knowledge of poetics.
She doesn't have a clue.
Repeating what others have already surmised on classic poetic works does not make you a good source of knowledge. She is a recording, a non-entity, and a boring, overblown, mouth-spewer.
 
From someone who has only asked ONE question in her entire yahoo career!
Likes to critique others, but hasn't the courage to post her own work.
Yes, I find that very interesting.

I know of no one who seeks her approval.
 
I wonder whether kitty will come out to play. She does indeed have sharp claws. Her recent calling card on one of mine was one word - doggerel. I guess it could have been worse

Anyway, I have enjoyed your work of art - I like your line - Your sudsy answers foam and lather - there is a great deal of imagery there (lol)
 
Indifferent. The girl knows her poetry though, that no one can deny.

She critiques in a very methodical manner (complete with her list of recommended poets)...but then, she is like that with everyone. She doesn't care if it's your first post, or if you have been here for 4 years.

I kinda dig her, and it's always interesting when she pops up.
 
Indifferent. The girl knows her poetry though, that no one can deny.

She critiques in a very methodical manner (complete with her list of recommended poets)...but then, she is like that with everyone. She doesn't care if it's your first post, or if you have been here for 4 years.

I kinda dig her, and it's always interesting when she pops up.
 
my other (purrs) answer was reported so I am coming and answering again with all due respect
It does not take much to become the top in a section, I have that honor in YAP Canada. I have no real background in Poetry I cannot recite or name the great poets, I simply exist, write and read and share sometimes I am rude and I should apologize for that, however I don't think I can help this so I won't as it might seem fake.

Your poem is witty
thank you for giving me an opportunity to express myself not once but twice
this is why I am using a back up account
when it goes down, well what to do, pack up and run or build another, if someone does not like my answer they will report it and I am not going to waste my time fighting it.
got better things to do than answer questions.
 
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