Some Poems I Wrote. I Need Your Opinion Please. :)?

Emo Gerl

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1) Graduation Night (10 Nov 2010)

After an a awesome night,
It's time for sleep to take fight.*
Thanks for an awesome time,
My happiness only climbed.*
Now here I am, going to sleep,
And tomorrow my alarm will bleep.*
I will wake up happy,
Thinking of last night's memories.*

2) I'll Miss You (17 Nov 2010)

The year is almost over.*
C'mon pick up your lucky clover.*
It will help you in the future.*
Lots of secrets and knowledge to uncover.
I will miss you all.*
Let's try to email or call.*
Keep in touch everyone.*
Memories - we will carry on.*
Throughout our lives.*
We will remember
These six years we spent together.

3) PSLE Results (24 Nov 2010)*

Tomorrow, we're getting our results.*
Hopefully everyone will be happy, parents and other adults. *
We would have done our best in the PSLE*
About this, I think everyone would agree.*
This would really be the final time we see each other as a class
Tomorrow, us being together, I hope it won't be the last.*
Time has gone by quickly.*
These memories won't be forgotten easily.*
 
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