Some Lyrics I Wrote..What Dya Think?

Hey, I'm a singer/songwriter and just wondered what you thought of these...Im performing some of my own songs at a local bar and just wondered what people thought? Ive never shown any of my songs to people before =/ !

Somewhere Else

You said it was me and not you,
Who had changed,
But I know you're wrong cuz I'm not the one,
F*cking a child half my age,
Well I should have known.

That you were too good to be true,
You made me fall so damn in love with you,
Na na na na na ...

All the sh*t you put me through,
How could you blame me?
All the lies that you told,
Man, the excuses are getting old,
But I never really understood,
Why when I put it out for you,
You never took the chance,
But now I know you were getting it, getting it,
Getting it, getting it,
From somewhere else.

Yeah... from somewhere else...

You've got your friends they lead you on,
You've no back bone,
So why would I want anyone,
Who lives by the rules that they set out?
You sing the same old same old stupid song,
Well stand back baby,
I've done no wrong.

All the sh*t you put me through,
How could you blame me?
All the lies that you told,
Man, the excuses are getting old,
But I never really understood,
Why when I put it out for you,
You never took the chance,
But now I know you were getting it, getting it,
Getting it, getting it,
From somewhere else

Yeah, yeah, yeah,
Yeah, yeah, yeah,
Somewhere someone else.

It's something that I didn't think,
You would ever be afraid,
To be comitted to me,
I didn't think, anticipate,
That you would ever be the same,
As any other jerk,
Well some day you'll see,
You'll get what you deserve.

Yeah..yeah...yeah..yeah..

You were too good to be true,
You made me fall so damn in love with you!

All the sh*t you put me through,
How could you blame me?
All the lies that you told,
Man, the excuses are getting old,
But I never really understood,
Why when I put it out for you,
You never took the chance,
But now I know you were getting it, getting it,
Getting it, getting it,
From somewhere else
All the sh*t you put me through,
How could you blame me?
All the lies that you told,
Man, the excuses are getting old,
But I never really understood,
Why when I put it out for you,
You never took the chance,
But now I know you were getting it, getting it,
Getting it, getting it,
From somewhere else

Getting it, getting it, getting it getting it,
Talk about getting it getting it,
From somewhere else!


=] So much anger lol

If it's ok, who do you think it sounds like, I think I sorta went for an avril lavigne kinda vibe lol but i dont know if i suceeded lol
xx
 
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