Some help with Haikus or poetry?

spartan

New member
Okay.... this may be a lame request since its pretty personal but could someone please help me make one Haiku.... First of all... The First Haiku got to be about great happiness or a sense of accomplishment... okay but anyways a Haiku is a Japanese Poetry by using 5 sylables in first verse... 7 in second... and 5 for third and thats it.... heres example

Maybe about the first time you ride your bike or hit a baseball or shoot a hoop or whatever that you have accomplished

Lonely in the green
seeing flowers bloom and grass sway
As I bask with bliss?

(I made this with the top of my head)
 
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