So I wrote this poem, do you think it's any good?

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through worn eyes, she she's a world
of love and peace
and hate and war

it's crumbling now
being broken down
by trust and love
being taken advantage of

her eyes hurt, her heart breaks
because she knows
it's all worth saving

but she's all alone
the only one left
who wants it all
because we're all deaf

we ignore the hope
ignore the strength
ignore the promise
ignore the faith

we ignore it all
for the sake of vanity
when we have to realize
what constructs reality


the friends you have, the chances you take
it can be worth all the sacrifice
it can be worth all the pain

she's fighting for her right to fight
her faith held strong, her will bound tight
she wants us all to see through her eyes
see the potential of this blood-stained night
 
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