so.. i wrote another one. will you critique it?

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erwin.wighter.

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i believe
in imagination
in creativity
in freedom

i believe
in love
in life
in lies

i believe
perfection
is a state
of mind

i believe
what others
refuse

i believe
reality
is a minds
prison

i believe
in no hope
to escape
nothing at all

i'll believe
whatever you want me to
your lies
your dreams

however
i refuse to believe
in me.



again. i don't really know.
 
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