Should I continue this story?

[Lee Denn.]

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2538372/1/30_minutes_to_madness

I totally forgot about it, but I just rediscovered it. Does it interest you?

 

[wiseoldd]

amazing... thats a good story well in my eyes u should continue it

 

[Lestaire]

YES! The choice of words here is amazing. Keep it up! (Send me a copy of it when you're finished, too!)

 

[Mikey]

The first few sentances totally grabbed me because I could relate to that, but afterwards, it got boring and sounded like stuff i'd heard before, written in a better style.