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She is... (My Poetry-Please respond & leave your feedback)
She constantly allows someone to steal her pride whether it is he or she
She listens to others thoughts and opinions without judging nor trying to change ones thoughts
She dresses for the occasion but other days she dresses for the mood
She will like to do more but there is always something she allows to get in her way
She wants to be loved and to love but she always feel the pain after all has ended
She is true to herself, but she let others cause her to shy away
She likes to be heard but after speaking she evaluates all and feels bad after said & done
She can't stand complainers, fakeness, or backstabbers
She has a problem with trusting any and everyone but GOD
She is thick and loves herself but also have insecurities of weight size
She prays and hope that God hears her prayers
She wants children but fear that she can't bear a child
SHE IS ME
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*What do you think of my short poetry?
I will like to write poetry, do you think I'll have a good shot to continue?
Should I work on anything?
She constantly allows someone to steal her pride whether it is he or she
She listens to others thoughts and opinions without judging nor trying to change ones thoughts
She dresses for the occasion but other days she dresses for the mood
She will like to do more but there is always something she allows to get in her way
She wants to be loved and to love but she always feel the pain after all has ended
She is true to herself, but she let others cause her to shy away
She likes to be heard but after speaking she evaluates all and feels bad after said & done
She can't stand complainers, fakeness, or backstabbers
She has a problem with trusting any and everyone but GOD
She is thick and loves herself but also have insecurities of weight size
She prays and hope that God hears her prayers
She wants children but fear that she can't bear a child
SHE IS ME
_________________________________________________________________________
*What do you think of my short poetry?
I will like to write poetry, do you think I'll have a good shot to continue?
Should I work on anything?