serious question. Is is okay to intentionally disrupt the flow of a poem? or

[DAHha's ship]

I think it is okay to intentionally disrupt the flow, IF, it adds to the poem. Kike Cilla's yesterday. It added to the poem.

 

[Giggles]

does that make you want to.....? fix it? Do you think it would still be a good poem?
and in doing so, does that make me a devil child?--giggles
HP--THAKS! all is clear to me now, like mud!

 

[Rhiannon Johnson]

it might be nice to have a disrupt in there
but it shouldnt distract too much cause that would throw off the tone and the theme i would think

 

[Cilla]

I'm not sure what you're asking Gigs.
I disrupted the flow of a poem yesterday - which you commented on. I think it added a nice effect.
You are definitely a devil child, but not for fixing poems. (Joke)

 

[Awkward]

hahaha - a devil child? no
i think its fine if you intentionally try to disrupt the flow if it adds to the overal intention of the poem - nothn wrong with experimenting with flow/rhyme

interesting q : )

 

[Awkward]

hahaha - a devil child? no
i think its fine if you intentionally try to disrupt the flow if it adds to the overal intention of the poem - nothn wrong with experimenting with flow/rhyme

interesting q : )

 

[lexy]

it depends if the poem is angry if its angry do as u please if its soft its ok to put sexy in it poems are u no 1 can change that if u want to disrupt the flow go ahead and do it.

 

[Evelyn]

...if a point needs to be underscored, then, yes

 

[hp...just add water]

no
it is not ok
to disrupt the flow

or is it?