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echoes

I am tired of treading softly, idly around in circles
I will stomp my footprint into the earth
so deep
it will become a fossil
and though its impact will be felt
my name is not
etched into my shoe
nor will I carve it

Our lives are our dialog with the world
Our conversations are too pure to be transcribed

foreplay

And I knew that piercing, satyric stare
"Let's fuck until it gets old," I said.

copyright

I cannot steal,
that which no one owns.
These worRAB are not mine,
I simply arranged them.
 
Good stuff Kitsch.

I really liked echoes, I dig the idea of how we're eternal even if nobody knows who we are. I also liked Foreplay, because it's short but sweet and the satyr thing is a good metaphor. Copyright is good, whats the backing story?
 
They're all very well done.

Echoes:
It seems to me, that you are almost poking fun at all the people who talk about the infinite and deepness that is "writing poetry" but putting those themes to work at the same time. Very paradoxical.

Foreplay:
LOVE IT. LOVE IT. LOVE IT.
 
the backstory behind copyright is that me and my frienRAB sit around and talk about **** and when we write either fiction or poetry we will borrow each other's ideas or phrases.



thanks man, but i think catharsis writes a lot better than i do.

rasputin, PECOAE (or w/e) and aklerc could all give me a run for my money
 
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