Moody, Tonks and Lupin get killed off-screen anyway so we'll never see their deaths.
What I think the film NEERAB is
- The scene at Malfoy Manor with Snape informing Voldemort of the plans. Plus Burbage's death.
- 7 Potters (plus The Dursleys having their moment)
- VERY FEW scenes at The Burrow (Dumbledore's will, the ghoul and a few 'explanation scenes' would be enough)
- Wedding (with Krum mentioning the sign Xeno has, Murial revealing Dumbledores past)
- Grimmauld Place (with Kreacher's tale, Lupin's arrival)
- Ministry Of Magic
- VERY FEW tent scenes
- Ron walking out on Harry/Hermione
- Godric Hollow
- Bathilda's Place
- Silver Doe (and Ron's return)
- Xeno's house
- A scene discussing The Deathly Hallows
- The trio's capture
- Malfoy Mansion (with Wormtails death)
- Shell Cottage (with Dobby's death)
- VERY FEW scenes at Shell Cottage (Lupin announcing Teddy is born, maybe a scene to talk about the Halows and one scene with Gornuk/Ollivander would be enough)
- Gringotts
- Escape on dragon, Voldemort's vision
- Hogsmeade (with Aberforth's tale)
- Entry to Hogwarts (with Hallow/Horcrux talk, arrival of Order and DA)
- Ravenclaw common room
- Snape vs McGonnogal
- Huge battle (Pupils standing in front of Harry, Fred's death, Crabbe's death, Ron + Hermione coming back from Chamber of Secrets, Ron + Hermione's kiss. All the minor characters should get a chance to shine here)
- Nagini killing Snape
- Harry seeing all (if not, most) of Snape's memorys)
- Voldemort 'killing' Harry, battle called off, Neville gets hat on fire, Harry returns
- Big battle again(Molly killing Bellatrix etc)
- Harry vs Voldemort (with explanations given)
- Celebration, and emotional scenes with the trio.

As long as all that is included and most of the waffle is left out then i'll be very happy!