Sailor's poem - poetry section?

[bobby's girl]

I will go and I will find him
My lover's lost and to the sea
But I can not live without him
Or the love he gives to me

They say I will never find him
That he's swallowed by the sea
Unforgiving salty waters
Won't return my love to me

But I'll sail tomorrow for him
To search the wide, wide sea
'Cause I hear his voice, he's calling
Have faith, my love, in me

I looked outside my window
Someone down the lane I see
A familiar figure walking
My darling's come back home to me...

 

[Tori ♫♪♫♪♫]

Have faith, my love, in me
...and how could you not.

Beautiful story, well told, and I too love the happily ever after ending. Life needs more of those. t

 

[lovechild]

oh my gawsh a happy ending! wow! thank you, maybe I can believe in happily ever after again.

 

[molley]

this earns a gold star!!
its very unique and i love the part when you said
They say I will never find him
That he's swallowed by the sea
Unforgiving salty waters
Won't return my love to me

keep writing you have talent