Sad poem. Rate please!?

Tom-tom

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Adding more to earlier. Don't be rude.

It was middle of dinner,
When it hit in my heart
I almost fell over,
It just tore me apart.
He's my guardian angel,

The one that I love.
He's still watching over me,
From heaven up above.
That wasn't last I saw him,
That wasn't the end.

I love him so dearly,
When I remember my friend

Today is his birthday,
But he's not here to celebrate,
I love him so dearly,
I remember the date.

We miss his hugs,
We miss his smile
We will miss him
Won't see em' for a while.

Free to roam thru the world
Free to start brand new
Free to soar thru the clouds
Free to do what grampas do.

He's not so far apart
We won't forget him
At least not in my heart.


Yes the stanzas are messed up, syllables aren't right... But it's supposed to be words that show what I feel.
 
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