RHH: Peep the new verse?

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GMan™ *Slugproofed*

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The way I try to write my rhymes
Is intricate so that my lyrical mind is infinite
No shutting doors, this show aint got no encore, spiritual lines that's eminent
Sticking to your mind permanently, expressing my thoughts imagery physiologically
Making sure its one with astrology, and still mixes in with physiology
Movin swift never stagnant, Just so you can feel it through autonomy
But my structure bein held up by a magnet, you couldn't possibly bother me
When you show up imma smash ya mic into fragments, purposely not an accident
It's no secret that this rap game I've mastered it, launched into the stratosphere
A place where I rank up and your a*s aint damn near
Across the world my name'll disperse, I dont need multiple tries to spit this uni-verse
That was given to me as the gift & a curse, to keep on expanding
Remanding way higher above the standings, a mountain in the landings
That's how I should be seen on the scene, pockets flooded with heavy cream
Imma get mine by any means
 
"Across the world my name'll disperse, I dont need multiple tries to spit this uni-verse"

couldnt read anymore after that... i had to go change my pants
 
to be honest it looks like you just threw in big words. you should focus on making more than two syllables rhyme . because anyone who has the internet can find big words and throw them in a rap if the last syllables rhyme...i hope i wasn't too harsh. you have some good punchlines tho
 
to be honest it looks like you just threw in big words. you should focus on making more than two syllables rhyme . because anyone who has the internet can find big words and throw them in a rap if the last syllables rhyme...i hope i wasn't too harsh. you have some good punchlines tho
 
to be honest it looks like you just threw in big words. you should focus on making more than two syllables rhyme . because anyone who has the internet can find big words and throw them in a rap if the last syllables rhyme...i hope i wasn't too harsh. you have some good punchlines tho
 
'When you show up imma smash ya mic into fragments, purposely not an accident'

I don't like this line because, we already know it's on purpose (Can't explain this, lolk)

Across the world my name'll disperse, I dont need multiple tries to spit this uni-verse

When I read this line, I thought of a Lupe Fiasco line "Big bang flow, spittin out uni-verses"

It's all good 8/10.
 
'When you show up imma smash ya mic into fragments, purposely not an accident'

I don't like this line because, we already know it's on purpose (Can't explain this, lolk)

Across the world my name'll disperse, I dont need multiple tries to spit this uni-verse

When I read this line, I thought of a Lupe Fiasco line "Big bang flow, spittin out uni-verses"

It's all good 8/10.
 
to be honest it looks like you just threw in big words. you should focus on making more than two syllables rhyme . because anyone who has the internet can find big words and throw them in a rap if the last syllables rhyme...i hope i wasn't too harsh. you have some good punchlines tho
 
to be honest it looks like you just threw in big words. you should focus on making more than two syllables rhyme . because anyone who has the internet can find big words and throw them in a rap if the last syllables rhyme...i hope i wasn't too harsh. you have some good punchlines tho
 
to be honest it looks like you just threw in big words. you should focus on making more than two syllables rhyme . because anyone who has the internet can find big words and throw them in a rap if the last syllables rhyme...i hope i wasn't too harsh. you have some good punchlines tho
 
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