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Okay, I wrote this poem earlier, and I'm only 13. I posted the other version, and people said it was too long, so I cut it in half. Is it till too long? Please comment and give reasons why. Thanks.
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Depending on
your point of view,
many things
can be seen
differently.
Either we
are like many,
or we are
all different.
Like many,
I have a body
But, unlike many,
or even all,
it's mine,
and no one elses.
Unlike many,
even all,
I have two eyes,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
a nose,
and it's mine,
and no one elses.
two ears,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
a mouth,
and it's mine,
and no one elses.
a face,
and it's mine,
and no one elses.
a head,
that is like no other.
Unlike many,
even all,
I have a neck,
and it's mine,
and no one elses.
two shoulders,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
a torso
that is like no other.
Unlike many,
even all,
I have two bicepts,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
two elbows,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
two fore-arms,
two arms
that are like no other.
Unlike many,
even all,
I have two wrists,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Two palms,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Ten fingers,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Two hands
that are like no other.
Unlike many,
even all,
I have a waist,
and it's mine,
and no one elses.
Two hips,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Two thighs,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Two knees,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Two calves,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Two legs
that are like no other.
Unlike many,
even all,
I have two ankles,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Ten toes,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Two feet
that are like no other.
So whether
your glass is
half empty,
or half full
can change
many views.
Do you live
to be alike,
or live
because you are alike.
Or, do you
live to be different,
or live because
you are diffent?
I have just
one, simple answer.
You are yourself
and always will be
no matter what
change or stage
you go through,
or even if
you are a twin.
My answer
is that I am just simply
Taylor, and
always will be
no matter what
view you have.
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Depending on
your point of view,
many things
can be seen
differently.
Either we
are like many,
or we are
all different.
Like many,
I have a body
But, unlike many,
or even all,
it's mine,
and no one elses.
Unlike many,
even all,
I have two eyes,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
a nose,
and it's mine,
and no one elses.
two ears,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
a mouth,
and it's mine,
and no one elses.
a face,
and it's mine,
and no one elses.
a head,
that is like no other.
Unlike many,
even all,
I have a neck,
and it's mine,
and no one elses.
two shoulders,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
a torso
that is like no other.
Unlike many,
even all,
I have two bicepts,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
two elbows,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
two fore-arms,
two arms
that are like no other.
Unlike many,
even all,
I have two wrists,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Two palms,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Ten fingers,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Two hands
that are like no other.
Unlike many,
even all,
I have a waist,
and it's mine,
and no one elses.
Two hips,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Two thighs,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Two knees,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Two calves,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Two legs
that are like no other.
Unlike many,
even all,
I have two ankles,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Ten toes,
and they
are mine,
and no one elses.
Two feet
that are like no other.
So whether
your glass is
half empty,
or half full
can change
many views.
Do you live
to be alike,
or live
because you are alike.
Or, do you
live to be different,
or live because
you are diffent?
I have just
one, simple answer.
You are yourself
and always will be
no matter what
change or stage
you go through,
or even if
you are a twin.
My answer
is that I am just simply
Taylor, and
always will be
no matter what
view you have.