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I made an announcement allowing the discussion of songwriting from a musical standpoint, as you state.

Just don't expect much feedback since not many people who are into songwriting like in music come here often, but it's a good start. :)
 
Its not so much that its sick, its just attentioon seeking

LOOK HOW DISGUSTING I CAN BE ZOMG

just makes it boring. Its not even dark, its just so over the top that it gets ridiculous. Not really much good I'm afraid.

And on top of that, the descriptions were bland, there was a lack of finesse to the writing and you seemed content to match boring nouns with boring verbs.
 
How bout some case studies or lessons? Basically, an analysis of a particular song, or style, or whatever.

I think it'd be interesting. But yeah, G unit.
 
I've been thinking of doing something like that.

Either an in depth analysis of a piece, pointing out what it does/doesn't do. Or an explanation of a certain style.

Then a discussion or whatever.

I could do it every fortnight or so.

Edit: I'll try typing a little something up, see what people think.
 
DeadReligion, you obviously aren't familair with Death Metal, Pornogrind, Goregrind, etc. My lyrics are tame in comparison to many of the banRAB that produce such a lyrics.

Now Surf, thank you for some critisism. That's what I was looking for. I'm not realy into changing the topic of the song, but I can see what you were going for when you said the nouns and verbs were boring. Next song I write I'll try to be more descriptive and use a bit less-simpleton worRAB.
 
Posts in certain forums for new users are moderated. I have approved both your posts, so you're good to go.

DeadReligion: I'm leaving that to Tojes 'cause I don't know enough about S&L to get that involved.

Mappy: done.
 
Death metal is terrible. People that need to sing about cutting girls' eyes out and fucking their empty sockets belong in a mental home. Not on stages as role models for children. They shouldn't be that close to children.
 
Ok, a similar problem to earlier in this thread. I can't post new threaRAB. I've tried several times over several days and I have activated the account because when I click the link in the email it says ;This account has already been activated blah blah blah'. Any ideas what the problem is?
 
-.- dude ur fag

it says:

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so I'm like, wtf?
 
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