Read this poem? Please!?

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Inflatable Pigeon

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I'm 14, this is a poem i wrote... yes indeed. have fun, there is meaning behind it if you wanna think about it :D

A funny story to laugh at,
you are,
standing upon a tower so high.

Pigeons with a stench,
so strong,
circle your antenna up high.

A funny little story you are.
Too bad
that you have eaten up your face.

A funny story to laugh at,
you were,
when you stood up on your tower so high.

But pigeons with a stench,
so strong,
pecked at your antenna, up high.

A migraine so piercing,
too much.
Blood leaked from inside your brains.

You couldn't resist the pigeons.
too bad,
with that stench, so strong.

They pecked at your antenna,
so hard,
a "no" could never escape your mind.

Such a funny story to laugh at,
you were,
standing with that antenna so high.

But the pigeons pecked and pecked,
to bad,
your balance was lost.
 
I really like it! The tercets work really well and the repetition gives the poem extra strength. I think it could be longer if you wanted it to be.
 
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