Read my poem Please ! ?

The Comedian

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Hey, I know it's not perfect, but I'm working on it. That's why I want you to tell me what you think :) thanks for reading and I hope you'll say your opinion.


The Last Turn

You can’t resist what you know well
It hunts the saint
It hunts the fell
No difference there, the heart is clear

You waver and fall
At its nearing approach
The newborn beast
Has had enough

You stop and you cry

Shouting in vain
You are dismissed

None to answer
The muffled prayer

Outdrawn fear

The end comes near
 
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