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spytechnician

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If you lok at the overall picture...it is a space craft.


Oh,
?how?
?how do?
?how do I?
?Oh how do I?
?Do se do or die?
?oh how do I?
?do se do den lie?
?dose da arm den die?

Slip,
Slip away into the day

Fade,
Fade to fade away

Slip,
Slip into the Milky Way

Fall,
Fall where I lay,
Lie where I die, Cuz I Lie where I lay....
Im cold to the touch, wanting to stay.
I feel death's brush, painting while I pray,
to a world full of ghosts, wanting to coast.
Just to toast, to be toast, while we fuel the roast
Maybe its this rage, or this diminished stage.
Could be the world writing my page,
Telling me to shut up, act my age!

Then put me on a leash,
just to unleash me to the street,
What kind of message does this send?
The whirlwind whips up again,
I hear the message my addiction senRAB,
quick to defend,
never quick to lend,
too fast to judge frienRAB,
Never listening to understand.

Body flimsy, Actions slow, hand shakey, ready to go.
Body heavy, head to toe, hand steady, ready fo mo.
I run from my pain,
but the stain remains,
I run from my pain,
As I strain to remain.
Body tired, highs and lows,hanRAB shaky, Brain cold.
Body wired, to and fro, hanRAB quakey, Brain bold.
I face my stains,
I won't run again,
I face my stains,
My shame does not remain.

It's as if I had been running on E and I needed a fill
Just a little sack or another pill.
I did it way back just for the thrill.
Now I just sit back, I feel what I feel.

I was running from an enemy that wasn't real.
Just gotta stack up more bills,
I did it way back just for the thrill.
Now I don't slack, I'm feelin what I feel.

Stand,
Stand tall into the day

Shine,
Shine to shine today

Stand,
Stand tall into the Milky Way

Shine,
Shine on to fly.
dose da mind wit pride
do se do den fly
?oh how did I?
?do se doh so high?
do se do den fly
?oh how did I?
?how did I?
?did I?
did
I?​
 
not really, you might want to put art on its own ontological plane but thats just the aesthetic of the 'beautiful and lofty'

if you want to really understand the context in which the art exists, the creator is the most important. we study art in contrast to other artists with similar styles, why not add the author as a variable in there. way to stick to the established viewpoints :thumb:

evolve.
 
If I use evolve it will be the fourth time we have done so today.

If people were lucky enough to meet most of the authors that wrote the art they liked it would be amazing.

Eitherway, the fact that you asked me if I was white prooves that you do not have the ability to look at a piece of art and interpret it as art without critiquing the artist.

If you must know.... everything I write is true. Sad....but true sir.

If you want to know more about the author of this poem then read my autobiography.
 
the fact that i asked you if you were white proves nothing, except that i was being facetious,

"fo mo," "dose da mind wit pride" wtf is this shit dude
 
Sound like the issue is witht he "reader" and not the author. Kit....do I have you so angry that you are reverting to highschool tactics to make me feel a certain way. We are on a forum..... if this was real life.... your worRAB might enact an emotional response.

It is a simple test for sound harmonics. Do se do...... say it Doe see doe.....

Lol slow down and read the material. Put a small beat to the back of it and slow it down......

I love using sound in poems....
 
:naughty:

:thumb:

:smoke:

Another usless post by Kit. for every one good one ya give...we read like 20 shitty ones :) I am about to get off because the GF is waking up. I'll give ya another round of responses after we go out for some target practice.

Have a good day Kit.
 
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