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Lebanon Don

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Follow the leader as i guide you through this
story,
Veiwer descresion is advised, it gets kinda
gory,
Lemme take you back a couple of years, lil trey
standin in the doorway in tears,
Red and blue lights flashin, the whole
neighbourhoods in fear,
His parents lay on strechers, bullet wounds
cover them,
Pernounced dead on the ride to the hospital,
he already misses them,
Maturin, now 15, got a girl, she a dime, no one
nicer,
Years go by now hes alot older, more wiser,
Raised by his brothers, street thugs and drug
dealers,
Hood slang divides the hustlers and concelers,
Graduated highschool dispite the street life,
Dedicated his diploma to his parents, its a
incredible site,
Headin to college to get his masters degree,
In his heart he knows his parents are always
there to see,
Couple years later he propses to his high
school sweet heart,
Married a few months later, baby on the way,
now hes got a family to start,
9 months later, its a boy, he names him jones
jr after his father,
His first words, first steps, he counldnt be
prouder,
Late night a work, comes back, black car
creepin,
Ignores goes inside queitly, the fam sleepin,
Closes the door, seconds later the door knocks,
Opens the door, steps out gets shot,
Reminisin to his past, picture of his father in
the same spot,
Looks up at the door sees his son is in shock,
 
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